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Metapod

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I'm attempting to draw all 151 first generation Pokemon :)

Here's the complete list, which shows who I've drawn already, and who I'll be drawing next: [link]
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Firstly, I'm extremely harsh when I critique things, don't take anything I say too badly as overall it's a good drawing.

Firstly, the lines are a little thick and, well, they look a little fudged at times. There's nothing too bad about them, they just aren't as neat as they could be. Also, the proportions aren't perfect (although they're good).

The colour is a little strange. It's not quite right if you were going for the light hitting it in a certain place, and it's far from a solid colour as well, as would generally be expected of a metapod.

The origionality is great. Who'd have thought of doing a metapod? I'd certainly never have thought to do one, you generally only see the first or last of an evolution chain.

Overall, it's a good idea, but it seems a little inexpert. It's a good start though, I'll have a look at any other work you do to see how you're doing.