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Metapod by Hunchdebunch Metapod by Hunchdebunch
I'm attempting to draw all 151 first generation Pokemon :)

Here's the complete list, which shows who I've drawn already, and who I'll be drawing next: [link]
Alright, here it goes. (i've never actually done one of these before) Overall, it's a great drawing, and you have really accurately displayed the Pokemon. If I had to criticize something, it would be how I can kind of see some marks outside of the Metapod, and possible some sketch marks inside the pokemon? I don't know if they're sketch marks or not. I like the colors as well. There is a bit of green outside the metapod, though. Again, overall, I think you did an excellent job. This has to be one of my favorite pokemon drawings that isn't digital! Great job!
What do you think?
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Firstly, I'm extremely harsh when I critique things, don't take anything I say too badly as overall it's a good drawing.

Firstly, the lines are a little thick and, well, they look a little fudged at times. There's nothing too bad about them, they just aren't as neat as they could be. Also, the proportions aren't perfect (although they're good).

The colour is a little strange. It's not quite right if you were going for the light hitting it in a certain place, and it's far from a solid colour as well, as would generally be expected of a metapod.

The origionality is great. Who'd have thought of doing a metapod? I'd certainly never have thought to do one, you generally only see the first or last of an evolution chain.

Overall, it's a good idea, but it seems a little inexpert. It's a good start though, I'll have a look at any other work you do to see how you're doing.
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Lokileo66 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh metapod!
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